Tuesday, March 3, 2015

The Marvelous World: World of Disney 2 - Chapter Eleven (w/ Commentary Notes)


Chapter Eleven: Realm D1995

            Pocahontas took Rogers downriver to an area secluded by the ancient weeping willow tree that towered over with many woodland creatures moving around its branches. A sensation of serenity came over Steve as he walked along the large, wide roots of the willow tree and sat upon a stump with Pocahontas. “This is great. And you come here often?” Rogers asked her.

            “Yes,” replied Pocahontas, who could not take her eyes off of Steve. “I come here to talk to Grandmother Willow.”

            Rogers saw her gesture to the willow tree, and he was a bit baffled. “Um…your grandmother is a…tree?”

            Pocahontas playfully smiled. “Look closely.”

(Authorial Note: Bits of the dialogue and actions were taken from the scene in Pocahontas that this one emulates, incorporating those by John Smith into Steve Rogers's.)

            He did as she suggested and gazed closely into one section of the tree that strongly resembled an elderly woman’s face. Then, after a few seconds, an actual face did emerge from the tree to Rogers’s immediate surprise. It was indeed the face of an elderly woman, and she even addressed him like one, “Hello, young man.”

            Rogers hardly knew what to say. “Uh…hi.”

            “Grandmother Willow, this is my new friend, Steve Rogers.” Pocahontas introduced.

            Grandmother Willow smiled warmly. “Come closer, Steve Rogers.” As Rogers had done so, he felt a group of thin branches push him further up to the face of Grandmother Willow, who stared deep into his eyes. “Such a young face, but an old spirit behind it.” This observation fascinated even Grandmother Willow herself. “You’re not from this land, Steve Rogers.”

            “I’m not,” he confirmed out loud, even though it was visibly obvious. “I’m not even from this world. I came here by accident from the magic of this sorceress.”

            “I do sense magic in your presence – strong magic.” Grandmother Willow said.

            “Is there a way you can find her – the sorceress, I mean?” Rogers asked.

            Grandmother Willow intuitively considered the idea, taking a short moment to ponder it. “The magic that surrounds you is beyond my understanding, I’m afraid. But, like I once told Pocahontas’s mother, the key is to listen.”

            “Listen to what?” Steve asked curiously.

            “Listen to the spirits, child.” Grandmother Willow said. “This world around you is filled with spirits. They live in the earth, the water, and the sky. Even the sorceress you speak of is a spirit herself. If you listen, she will guide you back to her.”

            Rogers accepted Grandmother Willow’s advice and listened carefully. A cool breeze blew through the area, clashing with the leaves. He felt himself engulfed in an atmosphere of serenity and could have sworn he heard singing and whispering – among various other noises – all around him. Closing his eyes, he concentrated much harder on the voices whispering into his ears. Pocahontas looked on with interest and then noticed how a small collection of colorful leaves billowed around him, accompanied with flashes of golden sparks.

(Authorial Note: Livingston wanted readers to feel a commonality between John Smith and Steve Rogers with the Pocahontas scenes, seeing not that much of a difference between the two characters and their presence in the story. Both men are White/Caucasian, both are blonde, and both aren't natives to the land.)

            “What do you hear, Steve Rogers?” Grandmother Willow asked.

            Steve smiled as he answered: “Everything.”

            In the midst of the soft singing and whispering, there abruptly came a loud, fierce (and familiar) roar that startled Rogers. He fell off his feet as if a powerful force knocked him down. Pocahontas and Grandmother Willow both grew concerned for him. “What’s wrong?” Pocahontas questioned.

            Rogers appeared intense. “The Hulk,” he muttered.

            His response confused the young native girl. “What?”

            Fighting to regain composure of what he heard and even felt, Cap reiterated on his answer: “A friend of mine…he’s…he’s in trouble…serious trouble.” He then looked to Grandmother Willow again and said with great caution, “I need to get back to my world now.”

            “You have to focus, Steve Rogers. Think of the sorceress – her voice, her appearance, her scent – these senses will help guide you to her.”

            Time was of the essence for Rogers; he didn’t have the patience for a spiritual journey. But he knew that if it was the key to finding Gigi and his fellow Avengers, then he would have to do as Grandmother Willow suggested. Shutting his eyes again, he focused hard on all of the senses he could recall from his brief time with Gigi. It was a difficult task with thoughts on what could have happened to Banner that led to another transformation – within another world of all places – running through his mind, but he did his very best for the sake of innocent lives.

Project Geo Base – 2012

            Gigi instantly knew something was not right the moment she and Sean rematerialized back in the base, and it wasn’t the hundreds of guns trained on her that clued her in. Several armed S.H.I.E.L.D. agents greeted them by surrounding them with their various firearms. It was one thing to have a gun pointed at her by Sean, but it was an entirely different thing to have it happen with several of his fellow agents. Gigi slowly raised her hands in the air while trying to figure out what was going on. She soon received her answer as soon as she heard Maria Hill yell, “Drop your weapon and get down on the floor!”

            Weapon? I don’t have any weapons on me…unless she’s talking about my hat, Gigi thought in confusion.

            That was when she heard the sound of a gun drop to the concrete floor from behind her, and she turned to see a petrified John Clayton with his hands high in the air, exposing the sweat-stained armpits of his yellow safari shirt. “Clayton? What’re you doing here?”

(Narrative Note: Clayton being an unintentional stowaway with real world characters returning to their world mirrors that of Buzz Lightyear in World of Disney when he was accidentally brought out of his realm with Joanie and Robin the Frog.)

            The gorilla hunter was too terrified to reply. Without a moment’s notice, he was handcuffed by a blond female S.H.I.E.L.D. agent whose name was shortly revealed to Gigi as Nick Fury emerged from the surrounding group of agents and instructed, “Agent Stevens, take our ‘guest’ into one of the offices. We’ll figure out what to do with him once we’ve gotten this mess sorted out.”

(Biographical Note: The role of "Agent Lisa Stevens" was written for Lisa Marie Stevens, a close friend and frequent collaborator of Livingston's. She was featured in the 2010 installment of The Disney Ghostbusters series, The Dead End, and appeared in the final DGB story in 2013. She's scheduled to appear in the upcoming Disney Mystery fanfic series, Case of the Weird & Wonderful, having already been featured in the Christmas one-shot.)

            Agent Stevens, who Gigi practically towered over, looked just as aggressive as she was attractive with piercing blue eyes that were quick to intimidate even a powerful sorceress like Gigi. She watched as Stevens led Clayton away as Fury ordered, and she felt relieved once she noticed all the agents holster their guns and return to their active duties, which confirmed that they were not for her. However, from the way Fury glared at her, she was still in trouble.

            “Did I ask you to bring someone from the other side here?” The S.H.I.E.L.D. director rhetorically asked.

            “I didn’t realize he was transported with us!” Gigi innocently admitted. “I swear it was an accident!”

            “And where’s Banner, Cap, and Stark? Please do not tell me they were lost, too.”

            Gigi could not bring herself to admit the truth, and she shortly realized that she didn’t have to as they were suddenly interrupted by another female S.H.I.E.L.D. agent, one that was much older, shorter, and intimidating than Stevens. This one was a darker skin color – almost the same skin tone as Sean – and she even reminded Gigi of an older version of her (Joanie’s) daughter, Ciciley. Of course, that notable similarity in skin tone just confirmed what Gigi suspected when Sean addressed the woman in surprise: “Moms? What’re you doing here?”

            Pointing to the woman that was marching their way, Gigi smiled and asked, “She’s your mother?”

            “Yeah, I am.” The woman viciously said. “And I’m also the woman who’s gonna kick your big ol’ butt!”

            Without warning, a fist came directly across Gigi’s face swiftly from the left, connecting with her eye. Although the blow took her by surprise, it didn’t do enough damage to leave a bruise. That was until she received a brutal roundhouse kick that sent her to the cold concrete. Knees collided with ribs as Gigi’s unanticipated opponent pinned her down and unleashed a series of left and right punches to her face. After two or three, a hint of Gigi’s blood was stained on Ciciley’s right hand.

(Editoral Note: Violent imagery such as this was what convinced Livingston to give The Marvelous World a "K+" rating on FanFiction.net. Stories that follow that rating on the website should be "suitable mature children, 9 years and older, with minor action violence without serious injury, may contain mild coarse language, and should not contain any adult themes." Livingston tread lightly on his content, particularly for being an installment of his otherwise family-friendly series.)

            Before the brutality could continue any further, Sean stepped in and pried his mother off of Gigi. Ciciley squirmed under the massive grip of her son, making things problematic for Sean. “Moms, chill out! What is your problem?”

            As he fought to get her under control, Elendriel and Solus then entered the scene, seeing the battered Gigi on the floor. Her once-flawless face was covered in cuts and bruises with blood seeping from her nose and the corners of her mouth and left eye. She struggled to get back on her feet, clutching her bruised ribs. Elendriel realized this woman was the “threat” that her mother spoke of, although she did not seem much of one from the insane ferocity that was unleashed on her just then.

            With her mother out of sight, Elendriel allowed her sympathies for Gigi to take over. Turning to Sammi, who seemed highly perturbed by the state Gigi was in, she said, “Help me get this poor girl into the infirmary. I think my mother has finally cracked.”

(UP NEXT: A problematic adversary returns!)

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